In the story of the Iliad i learn a lot about the gods, heroism, an being true to your heart. i also learn that there is nothing can be compared to the story of Iliad be cause this is one of the most greatest work of the Greek.
I were to make my own version of the Iliad maybe the chapter about hector because if hector died what will happen to Helen? so if may write my story about that chapter i would like to change the part that hector will be able to live and also became one of the greatest men. Hector will be the greatest king and he will be able to live happily ever after with Helen. with this story it can make the war end soon. no war no bloodshed. i also want to change the part where the gods did not do there job as the GODS for example the part where Zeus pick a side. as we all know that they have to be wise and just. maybe if this part will be change the war will also stop. as i said no war no bloodshed.
While reading the book i had some realization. one of this is about having a broken family where it falls at the chapter about hector. it so hard to have a broken family specially when one of the members of the family died because of one's protection. i know it is hard that's why i don't want to see or hear about a broken family. its all about being together.
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ReplyDeleteIt would have been better if you picked one book to revise, and then you narrated the twist clearly.